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Hello everyone, as the title says, thank you all so much for the 4000+ views. I'm glad to see the story is well liked, and I'm sorry for having it be on hold for this long, but I had planned on fixing the story into a proper story format. I have only Chapter 8.5 to fix and I will be working on the story again. If you want to read the fixed story, just click on the link to read what I have done so far.

mobile.fimfiction.net/story/86…

Also, I have been getting ideas for the next chapter as well as the other chapters and as a special treat for waiting this long, I will leave you with a sneak peek at what I have typed up for Chapter 9. Enjoy.

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Over at The Candy Store, we find the Eds leaving the store with big satisfied grins plastered on their faces. What's the reason behind this? Each of the Eds is holding a jawbreaker the size of a basketball in their hands.

"Ok boys, last time we had these, it was season four, but we FINALLY got our jawbreakers!!" shouted Eddy with joy.

"Eddy, didn't we get jawbreakers after we returned to the Cul-de-Sac after that adventure you put us through?" questioned Double D.

"Well, yeah. But if I remember right, it wasn't on screen," Eddy simply said.

Without another word, the Eds closed their eyes and readied themselves to eat their long-awaited jawbreakers. But before they could enjoy their jawbreakers, the cotton candy clouds appeared above the Candy Store and spread to the Cul-de-Sac, and a downpour of chocolate rain poured onto the Eds. When Eddy was about to put the jawbreaker in his mouth, he smelled something funny. He opened his eyes and was shocked to what he saw in his hands.

"WHAT THE-?!?" questioned Eddy in complete shock.

The once jawbreaker that was in his hands, was replaced by a meatball, the size of the jawbreaker. Double D heard Eddy's outburst and opened his eyes to see what was wrong, only to see that his jawbreaker was also replaced with a giant meatball. His reaction was no different from Eddy's from what he saw.

"GOOD LORD!!!" yelled Double D, also in shock.

After hearing both of his friends react to something, Ed opened his eyes and saw that his jawbreaker had also been turned into a meatball. He looked at it for a few seconds in confusion. He then shrugged it off and took a bite into the meatball. In a fit of rage, Eddy threw the meatball on the sidewalk and wanted to go back into the Candy Store. But before he could go back into the Candy Store, the door slammed into his face and the closed sign was present on the glass door. This didn't stop Eddy, as he started banging on the door with his fists.

"You backstabbing jerks ripped me off! I want my money back!" shouted Eddy while he pounded the door in anger.

Eddy then started ramming his shoulder into the door, attempting to knock it down. Double D covered his face with his right hand and shook his head in dissatisfaction from what Eddy was trying to do.

"Ed, could you please stop Eddy before he hurts himself?" asked Double D.

Ed was still eating his meatball, but he gave him the "ok" sign with his free hand and responded with a mouthful the meatball.

"Okey dokey Double D!" said Ed, and with that, Ed finished off his meatball and grabbed Eddy by his shirt. He desperately tried to get out of his grip, but couldn't because of the good grip Ed had on him. After a few minutes of blowing off steam, Eddy finally calmed down and walked with Ed and Double D. He sulked in silent defeat, wondering how the jawbreakers were still taken from them, despite them being in their hands.

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There is my preview to Chapter 9, if anyone wants to see any changes, or any ideas to leave behind, just leave me a comment. Thanks again everyone.
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victauron Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Chapter looks good so far and when do you think you will release it?
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natedeanmaan Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
There is still some things to work out, but I should have it up sometime next month.
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Nbbren Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I have a question, how would the Eds be able to battle Discord?
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natedeanmaan Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That was a question I asked myself for the longest time. I think I will use some of their attributes from the show as well as their game, "Ed, Edd n Eddy: The Mis-Edventures".
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F3d323 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
<YUUUUSH YUUUUUUS YEEEEEEEEES



Eddy, I only have to say one thing... GAME OVER YEAAAAAAAAAAAH.
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megthedoodler1999 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol awesome ^^
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ededdeddyy Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
so far so awsome :D
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